I Believe I Can Fly (Audio Story 2)
- Jay Barrera
- Feb 11, 2019
- 1 min read
Updated: Feb 12, 2019
Remake of my story. Tweaked it slightly, slowed the narration down a few beats, altering the tempo.
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This story is absolutely adorable. I'm pretty sure just about everyone has some crazy story of a stunt they pulled when they were young. Jay, you did a great job of recreating the excitement and drama that I'm sure was surrounding the situation when it happened. Your tone of voice and music selection is spot on. The only thing that I'd advise is to maybe reduce the volume of the music in a few places where it drowns out some of the narration. Other than that, great job!
Changing you pace really made a great story into a wonderfully fun story! I enjoy your very descriptive style. Great job!
-Brent
I love the additions and changes you made. The description of the multiple attempts to fly were so descriptive. I could really envision it all happening. Slowing it down a bit in some parts really helped, too. Nice work!
-- Hayley
Jay, this is absolutely wonderful!! Your enthusiasm is captivating and you did such a great job employing background sounds to connect with your listeners. This flows really well and it sounds like a really great story at a family dinner or something that would have everybody's attention and want to be shared. Great job.